Avira, Varidias

[varidias]

★ NAME: Varidias Vulpes Avira
★ NICKNAME:
★ MEMBER GROUP: Gijinka
★ POKEMON: Staraptor
★ AGE: 18
★ HEIGHT: 5.8 feet
★ WEIGHT: 120
★ APPEARANCE: He has black hair. His black hair always covers his right eye.His skin is pale. His uncovered eye is dark blue. The other eye, the covered one, is red like a staraptor's eye. His hair is mostly tidy.
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P E R S O N A L I T Y

★ POSITIVE:
- loyal
- intelligent
- independent
- observant
- brave

★ NEGATIVE:
- vengeful
- quiet
- stubborn
- vicious
- impatient


★ HABITS, QUIRKS:
- tends to plan things out to get exactly what he wants
- he enjoys fighting but most of the people he fight don't have a chance
- he doesn't befriend anyone


★ OVERALL PERSONALITY:

Varidias is ruthless and wants vengeance on anyone that hurts his friends. He does not care for himself he will bravely do anything for the friends that he is loyal to. He has a high amount of intelligence that comes mostly from being observant. He is a bit quiet and impatient to do things but overall he is alright. Oddly enough, even though he is loyal to his friends he won't befriend anyone.



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H I S T O R Y

When Varidias was younger his father disappeared and his mother passed away. Varidias was raised by an orphanage and once he was old enough was sent to a boarding school. At the boarding school he met a boy who had no parents, like him. The boy and him became good friends. The boy's name was Seprio Akuji. Seprio and Varidias stayed at the boarding school for years. During that time Seprio became 'mute' and wouldn't to speak to anyone except Varidias. When Varidias was 14 he found a note saying we have captured your friend, do as we ask and we will release him. Varidias did as the person asked, and that was to be turned into a gijinka for a project. The project was a secret from the other members of the society because it wasn't 'what they stood for'. Varidias was changed into a gijinka because of a member of team rocket. And the member that changed him? None other than his own father that disappeared. When he asked his father to release Seprio now his father laughed and said, 'Release him? What are you talking about? He is a member of Team Rocket!' Horrified, Varidias promised himself to never let himself be betrayed again. Ever since then Varidias has never befriended anyone else. He also doesn't know what Seprio does anymore, he never spoke to Seprio again after what happened.


P L A Y E R I N F O

★ OOC NAME: Adam
★ AGE: 16
★ OTHER CHARACTERS: I am going to make Seprio
★ RP SAMPLE: A paper blew off of the tree it was nailed to. The paper remained in the air for a while but soon someone caught it. The person who caught the paper had black hair, a gold eyes and next to him was a silver-furred wolf with silvery blue eyes. The person looked at the paper and read it out loud. "Vampire hunters wanted... interesting. This would be a good job for us, since I am afterall Vampire Hunter Shiyuki and you are my partner Kai . Kai, find where this is from." The wolf, Kai, almost seemed to smirk right before he sniffed the paper, another day, another mission as they say.

[Ω Tama Ω]

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First thing first, please use the template provided here. Quote the post there for the coding, and not just copy the information from the template. Also, keep all the information points intact, don't remove the Face Claim either. If some information doesn't apply to your character (like Nickname, Face Claim), just put N/A there. Now for the issues with the content.

What measure is the weight in? I bet it's pounds, but please write it there.

I would like you to expand on the appearance a bit, especially if you don't have an FC for the character. What body shape does he have? Is he strongly built, or skinny? Does he have any outstanding features other than the mismatched eyes? What clothes does he usually wear? Things like that, so others can have a decent image of the charater without actual pictures.

"He enjoys fighting but most of the people he fight don't have a chance" - This sentence assumes that he always wins, and I can tell that he won't always win in RP. Please correct it or change it to something else.

You can expand more on the personality too, but there are things that are contradictional already. You say he doesn't befriend anyone, but he does everything for his friends. If he doesn't have friends, how can he do that? It doesn't make sense. Maybe he doesn't like to consider others as "friends", but they are still one? But how does that work out? Is he acting cold toward people so they won't consider him friend, but at the same time, he considers them friends already? As it is now, I don't see the logic behind it, but I'm sure you can convince me with a few more sentences there.

"He is a bit quiet and impatient to do things but overall he is alright." - I'm not sure whaty ou mean by "alright" here, it's quite unclear. Expand on your thoughts there too, and your personality section will get longer with that too.

Now, on to the history. The biggest issue there is the fact Varidias's father is acting the way he does upon the behalf of Team Rocket. There was no logic in forcing the boy to became a gijinka "just because", and Team Rocket wouldn't do that either. The TR leader, Oliver doesn't care if anyone is a gijinka or not, all he cares about is that they follow his beliefs and do what he says. If it was a personal issue between the father and Varidias, that is a completely different matter, but there would still need a reason for him to force his son into becoming a gijinka. I would also like to know what that "project" you mentioned there is. Again, if you can convince me with reasons and explanation, there won't be anything holding you back from being accepted.

[ress]

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