Valko Fenris

[Valko Fenris]

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B A S I C I N F O

★ NAME: Valko Fenris
★ NICKNAME: None
★ MEMBER GROUP: Gijinka
★ POKEMON: Arcanine
★ STATUS Legal
★ AGE: 18
★ HEIGHT: 5'7"
★ WEIGHT: 110lb
★ FACE CLAIM: Matthew Williams (Canada) from Axis Powers: Hetalia
★ APPEARANCE:

Standing at 5'7 Valko is just an average height for someone of his age, he has a sleek stature and he does not have that much of a muscle mass due to his lack of working out. His hair is of medium length and a darkish shade of blonde. He has only one prominent curl at the front whereas the rest of his hair is usually straight. His violet eyes do not give the best sight and as such he must wear glasses.

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

★ POSITIVE:

• Independent
  
• Aspiring
  
• Unpretentious
  
• Competitive
  
• Logical
  

★ NEGATIVE:

• Cynical
  
• Sarcastic
  
• Reclusive
  
• Timid
  
• Lazy
  

★ HABITS, QUIRKS:

• Stutters when talking.
  
• Bites thumb when nervous
  
• His seated position is much more comparable to that of a canine after the transfusion
  

★ OVERALL PERSONALITY:

Valko is a timid man, through and through, always preferring to steer clear of people rather than than approaching them. His defense mechanism automatically comes into play when others approach him, even with his quiet voice, the sarcasm and cynicism he has employed for most his life seems to keep others away, most of the time. He hopes one day he can become something great, wishing to be somebody, though deep down he believes he will never make it and because of this he chooses to laze around. His reclusive nature has left him independent and believing he can overcome most obstacles with his own resources.

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H I S T O R Y

• Valko grew up being the only child of a middle-class family. For most of his childhood, Valko had lived without friends, due to his refusal of making friends or even talking to other people unless it was of absolute necessity, his family had always worried about it, even though they knew it wasn't normal for a child to act like that they made no attempts to help fix the issue.
  
• At the age of 15 Valko was returning home from one of his nightly relaxing sessions in the grassy field near his house when he found the front door to be slightly ajar, one of the window panes on the door smashed open so that somebody could unlock the door from the inside, walking inside he found his parents lifeless corpses on the floor of the living room. For him this was the breaking point pushing him further and further deeper into his reclusive and timid nature as he just knelt there beside his parents weeping. He was sent away to live with his uncle on his father's side, one of the only family members he could communicate with properly other than his parents. His uncle was a wealthy man who owned a large house and lived within it alone.
  
• Two years into his stay with his uncle Valko contracted the disease, his uncle rushed him off to Epispect and paid the necessary funds to fuse him with a Pokemon's genetic code to destroy the virus, even though he knew it would cure him his uncle also knew it would make Valko a hated being and he would not be able to look after him anymore in case it damaged his own reputation and thus gave him a necessary amout of money to look after himself and sent him packing back to his old family home which was now in his possesion due to his parent's will.
  
• He had been living alone in his house for a year now and life had become much more difficult since he became a Gijinka, people everywhere hated him for what he had become and often people would pass his house and yell abusive phrases or throw objects such as rocks at his house. He usually only left his house on pure necessity or in the cover of darkness where he could hide away in the field near his house.
  

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P L A Y E R I N F O

★ OOC NAME: Marcel or Spud, either will do.
★ AGE: 18
★ OTHER CHARACTERS: Nope
★ RP SAMPLE: I just randomly found this on one of my old sites~

Accila was panicing, there was water all over the place, what was happening? Why was there water everywhere? these were the first questions to pop into her mind along with where was Cali Ma? Her eyes were filled with fear and she had no idea what to do or where to go.

She wondered for a minute, was her running away and joining Cynvi a bad omen that had brought this on but she shook this off quickly she knew that this was physically impossible. She decided to look out of the cave and the water covered the entire packlands. "Th-This is terrible, Cali Ma and everyone else, I hope they're okay".

The water rose higher and now it looked as if it was about to swallow the pup whole, her fear grew much larger now she needed to get out and to get somewhere higher up but where? She did not know much about the Cynvi land and underneath the water it looked completley different. But she had to do it so she swam, she swam as energy conservant as she could, because god forbid she knew she needed as much energy as she could.

It was then that she saw some high rocks that she could possibly swim over to and clamber onto so that was exactly what she did. When she reached the rock it was jsut low enough for her to clamber out of the water and onto the rock.

Her pelt was dripping wet and she was shivering, her thoughts still out to every member of the pack were they okay? had any drowned? She tried not to let in the pessimistic thoughts but it was to hard to block them out. All she could do was yell out. "HELP!!" She did not know whether anyone would come, but she hoped that someone heard it and was close by. She sat on the rock whimpering and waiting.

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Hello and welcome to the site, Marcel! I've seen you running around in the cbox previously, so it's good to finally get to see your app! I'll get right down to it so you can get to RPing as soon as possible.

First things first - your FC doesn't match up to your pokemon. A gijinka will generally share a similar coloration to their pokemon, so an arcanine would generally have either red hair or blonde hair. Your current FC simply doesn't match up, so you'll need to either change pokemon or FCs.

Your personality is good, if a bit sparse, but otherwise gives me a good idea of what he's like. The history, however, does have a few issues. It might just be an issue with wording for the first paragraph - do you mean he literally lived alone, or do you mean he was a loner, who didn't interact with people much? I'd also like to see some mention of what class they were, because that'll play in later.

We're having a bit of a jump between the second and third paragraphs. It's not entirely clear where he was for those two years. Staying with a friend? The fourth paragraph has a similar issue. Being an illegal Gijinka means that people will intend to hunt and kill you, and there doesn't seem to be any reason he'd want to be a Gijinka beyond his natural competitiveness.

The other issue I'm seeing is an issue of classes. Only upper class families would have enough money to throw around on therapists just because their son is a bit quiet, in which case there's a fairly decent social structure. An orphaned 15 year old would be living with family, or properly adopted, not just left to go out on his own.

When you've made the changes, please post to let the staff know you've editted.

[Valko Fenris]

Alrighty, pretty sure I have now made all the necessary changes
(Pretty late at posting them because of current limited internet status ^^')

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ACCEPTED!

Welcome to W&K!