HIMURA, kohaku

[kohaku]

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LET THE WHOLE THING BLOW

B A S I C I N F O

★ NAME: kohaku himura
★ NICKNAME: haku
★ MEMBER GROUP: team rocket
★ POKEMON: shiny shinx
★ STATUS legal
★ AGE: 16
★ HEIGHT: 4'11"
★ WEIGHT: 140 pounds (muscles)
★ FACE CLAIM: Edward Elric from Fullmetal Alchemist
★ APPEARANCE:

Kohaku is a short man for his age. Only standing at 4' 11'', he is the shortest of his family. He has medium long blonde hair that he keeps in a braid except for his bangs and a small little tuft of hair that stands in between them. He has lightish brown eyes, almost golden. His complexion is pale, which means he burns easily in the sun. He wears all black clothes and a red jacket with combat boots. Due to having difficulties with the transfusion, he has a metal arm and a metal leg.

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

★ POSITIVE:

• loyal
  
• friendly
  
• protective
  
• generous
  
• outgoing
  

★ NEGATIVE:

• blunt
  
• tempermental
  
• jealous
  
• stubborn
  
• aggressive if tempted or angered
  

★ HABITS, QUIRKS:

• tends to cause sparks when angered
  
• thinks out loud
  
• body glows when scared or in danger
  

★ OVERALL PERSONALITY:

Kohaku is loyal and friendly. Always one to try and help someone. However, he can be angered easily but other than that, he is a very outgoing and kind person. He is rather protective when it comes to children and women, often fighting to protect them. He often gives away his own food to homeless children and plays with the orphans that run around Aether. Prone to fighting, he can become rather aggressive when his friends or himself are threatened. Kohaku is also quite jealous and stubborn, so he won't back down if he sets his mind to something.

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H I S T O R Y

• he was born to a high middle class family in the late part of august. he then got a younger brother two years later.
  
• when he was around seven, he got the virus. his father and mother got all the money he could to get Kohaku the transfusion. when the boy got the transfusion, there was difficulties where he had to lose his right arm and left leg.
  
• after losing them, the transfusion was a success, but then Kohaku had to get a metal arm and metal leg to replace the ones he had lost.
  
• a few years later, he joined Team Rocket because he disliked how people hated each other because they were either Gijinka or Humans.
  

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P L A Y E R I N F O

★ OOC NAME: alice
★ AGE: old enough
★ OTHER CHARACTERS: ai tsukino
★ RP SAMPLE:

you know how i role

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★ template was made for wretches and kings, do not steal ★

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CLEAR AND TRUE

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[ress]

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Welcome back, Ai. W&K does not strictly speaking deny characters, but at this time Kohaku cannot be accepted in his current form. Simply speaking, he's not an OC - he's a renamed canon. Most, if not all his traits are the same as his FC, as are his two primary quirks. In this case, it's gone too far over the line from 'inspired by' and into 'is a clone of'.

Before he can be looked at, he'll need some significant changes to differentiate him. Please post when you've made them.

[kohaku]

I took out the primary quirks that is like his FC, but I would like to point out (not rudely) that not all of Kohaku's traits are like Edward Elric.

I read up on his personality. There is a great difference in how they act. Where Kohaku is more likely to help someone out of selflessness, Edward is more likely to help someone out of self-gain. Kohaku is not selfish, where as his FC's personality is. He also does not have issues with authority figures, like his FC.

Please, again, don't take my words rudely. But I have made Edward Elric and Kohaku different from each other.

[ress]

ACCEPTED!

Welcome to W&K!