MEINE REINHARD

[Meine Reinhard]

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B A S I C I N F O

★ NAME: Meine Reinhard
★ NICKNAME: Klutz
★ MEMBER GROUP: Gijinka
★ POKEMON: Spinda
★ STATUS legal.
★ AGE: 13
★ HEIGHT: 5' 3''
★ WEIGHT: ~100lbs
★ FACE CLAIM: Soul Eater Evans from Soul Eater
★ APPEARANCE:

Meine has very light, almost white hair. It is very messy and hard to keep down. On his elbows and knees you will noticed small cuts and bruises due to falling constantly. His eyes are a light sea blue. His expression is almost always calm until he starts to fall. He is usually wearing hoodies and jeans. Rarely does he wear T-shirts. You won't catch him dead in shorts.

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

★ POSITIVE:

• Calm
  
• Smart
  
• Open Minded
  
• Loyal
  
• Trusting
  

★ NEGATIVE:

• Lazy
  
• Shy
  
• Awkward
  
• Passive
  
• Conservative
  

★ HABITS, QUIRKS:

• Saying OTL when he feels like a Failure.
  
• Tripping over nothing.
  
• Jumbling up his words
  

★ OVERALL PERSONALITY:

When he first meets someone he is very shy and doesn't like to talk too much. If he was with another person he knew, he would be by them the whole time. After he is able to trust the new person, he warms up to them and shows a lot more of himself. He doesn't really like to show off, and when he gets his attention it's on accident and at the worst times.

Meine is very loyal to his comrades. He would fight for them any day. He usually is the one being protected. When he sticks up for his friends, he usually just gets in the way. He is better at supporting them emotionally. He is so much better at motivating than helping physically.

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H I S T O R Y

• Meine was born in 3062, with no signs of any illnesses or flaws. He had grown up as a normal child until his parents were kidnapped while biking home, at night, by thugs from the black market. His brother, Marco, had taken care of him up until they both had caught the virus. They were brought to a hospital by a close friend, named Roden Belsky,who had been with them for the last 3 years.
  
  
• Meine had caught the rare virus at the age of 12. His brother had been in the same hospital with him. Roden had been at their sides 24/7 to help them get better. Meine was very close to death. Marco had a much more mild case of the virus. Epispect had taken Marco and Meine in and had taken the DNA from a Banette and a Spinda and had infused it into the Brothers' bodies. This was a very expensive thing to do, but a mysterious man appeared out of nowhere. He had told them that his parents used to work in this building and have saved money for a situation like this. He left them a note from his parents.
  
  "Dear Boys,
  We are very sorry that we had to leave. The virus has been spreading and is now also dying out, making people greedy and wanting this DNA for selfish reasons. If you have received letter, you are now a Gijinka and you had used the money we saved for you to treat the virus. You probably won't see us for a very long time. There is also a possibility that people from the black market have taken us to create DNA for them to use. Whatever you do, don't come looking for us.
  
  Love,
  Mom & Dad
  
  
• Meine's body had been greatly affected by this. He used to be very active and playful. Now he is a fool tripping over nothing. He wondered why he didn't get that Banette DNA but he was glad that he was all better. He and Marco now were searching for their long lost parents who they may never see again. They needed to have their family back together.
  
  
• Meine has been kidnapped the same month that he was treated by Epispect. Marco had came to the rescue. He had to get through 5 men to get to his brother. It took him some time but he got his brother back. They had to be more cautious now that they were Gijinka's with pokemon DNA.
  

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P L A Y E R I N F O

★ OOC NAME: Meine
★ AGE: 13
★ OTHER CHARACTERS: Nope
★ RP SAMPLE:

Meine Stared at 2 pigs that were both lying down,cuddling. Should he disturb them? Well they weren't real. He sneaked behind them so they wouldn't notice him. They looked so cute.

"D'awww" Meine whispered, "I'm sorry, but i have to!"

Meine jumped into the air and his halberd glowed green. He slammed the halberd down onto the pigs, full force. The pigs squealed, and with little to no health, ran away. Meine was chasing after this pigs. Korre sat on a branch on a nearby tree. He was very tired. He had killed many of the pigs anyways.

"Get back here!"

Meine ran after them until he caught up to them and slammed down his halberd hitting them with the edge of the blade. He was grateful that his weapon could attack at a long distance. If it was a sword or a dagger, he would have never even caught up to those pigs. The pigs exploded into a millions of little pixel-y shards and disappeared.

Korre jumped down from the branch and swooped over and landed on Meine's head. This quest felt a lot easier than when it had started. Meine was starting to get the hang of it. He was actually having some fun.

"I guess 5 pigs is all i need to kill, right?" He yelled over to the others.

He was a little exhausted. They seemed like they could go on forever. He admired how strong they were and how calm they are... Well... Not Katia.

Meine sat down and sighed. 'Bleh.'

A pig appeared behind Meine and tackled him from behind, making him lose about 10% of his health. Korre fell off of Meine's head.

"Oww!"
"Moo!"
.....
"Rawr*" Korre corrected himself.

Meine jumped up and right away swung the halberd into the pig.
If it wasn't a pig... If Meine was wrong and it wasn't a pig... that would have hurt.

The pig's health dropped to 0. Meine really hit that pig hard. He started to rub his back.

"Stupid pigs." He mumbled

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[Cori]

currently pending

Hey there Meine, and welcome to Wretches and Kings! It's always nice to see a new member, but before I can accept your profile, there's just a few things that need fixed, alright? :3

First off, there's your appearance section...or, well, lack thereof. While some sites won't require you to fill out that part of the bio so long as you have a face claim, we still require at least a few lines of physical description. It doesn't have to be too in-depth, just enough to cover the basics.

Second, there's his personality. Open-minded and conservative (unless you meant reserved?) are antonyms of each other, so he can't really be both. So could you chose one or the other and find another trait to fill the space? Additionally, clumsy in itself is more of a physical trait, unless you mean that he's also clumsy over words? Awkward could be a good one there, though it's a bit broad. And then there's the overall description...could you maybe make the summary just a bit longer, including and elaborating on more of the traits from the above sections? :3 Sorry if I'm being a bit nitpicky, really, I'm just trying to help.

Lastly, there's a few things I have to point out about the history that don't quite line up for the site timeline. For one thing, the apocalypse was not a recent thing, so there's no way that Meine and his brother could have lived through it. For another, the medical procedure that turns someone into a gijinka was perfected around twenty years ago - I'd link you to the first successful gijinka's profile, but it was deleted by hackers - not within the last year. There's also the matter of this rule we have on WK that characters must be from Aether or the nearby areas. No other colonies. And if I may ask, what did Meine's brother/family do? Transfusions are expensive, and two of them would put them heavily in debt...that they could afford it without some kind of income or support from an outside source just wouldn't work, so might you please elaborate?

Whew, that should be it! Again, I'm sorry if any of this seems too strict or nitpicky.

[Meine Reinhard]

Okay. I edited it and corrected everything. I meant conservative as in very quiet. He is very vague and doesn't like to go into too much detail. And he also is very careful about what he wears. He doesn't like clothes that are short like shorts and t-shirts. He wears hoodies and pants.

[Cori]

currently pending

Alright, it's already looking a lot better, but there are still a few little things that make me hesitant to accept this. For one, you said that the Black Market didn't want his brother's DNA, when really...they're back-alley thugs, they aren't that picky. A gang or power or DNA hungry scoundrels wouldn't care enough to be picky over DNA types, they'd take and kill anyone they can get their hands on. DNA is DNA. But that's not the major thing here. What really bothers me is that their parents worked for Epispect but they had no idea. I mean, I suppose it could be to protect them, but it's not as if it would need to be a secret...and when they disappeared, even after using their money their parents and with their friend's help, I doubt that Epispect would just let them go without putting some kind of leash on them if their parents really were connected somehow. Not to mention that the letter and the disappearance seems kind of fishy...I'm sure Epispect has guards that would keep an eye on their employees. Did they defect on their own, were they taken for sure, or did they simply go into hiding? It all seems kind of fishy, but that's just me. If you think I'm being too harsh here, you're always welcome to ask someone else on staff for a second opinion, so long as it's not a bad time for them.

[Meine Reinhard]

Edited.

[Cori]

currently pending

Okay. I promise that this should be the last time I pend this, as there are just a few details I overlooked previously. First of all, if his parents were kidnapped in the middle of the night, I don't think the Black Market would've left lose ends; unless they were taken on their way home and never made it back, they probably would've gotten rid of the boys once they realized the scientists weren't alone in the house - I doubt they would think far enough ahead to realize "hey, maybe these kids will become gijinka and we can kill them for their DNA later."

The second thing is one that's actually been bugging me for a while: a certain line in the history. "This was a very expensive thing to do, but a mysterious man who had said to know their parents." ...but a mysterious man who had said to know their parents what? Even adding just the word "appeared" would have that make a lot more sense, especially given what comes after. Just wanted to ask clarification on that. '>w>

Hopefully that's all. I really hope I haven't missed anything else. ^-^'

[Meine Reinhard]

I have edited hopefully for the last time; ^ ;

[Cori]

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ACCEPTED!

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